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Do you like this poem

Alone

Alone in this big house Because your gone Cheating Im alone because u

Forbid my friends Im alone because of u You dont want To b with me Im alone

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Answer #1

its great I like it :)

Answer #2

Its really good, did you write it!? I like it, you should write one 4 me! write one about a girl crushing on a guy, who knows she likes him, but he ignores the fact that she wants 2 know if he likes her 2! you dont have 2, but it would B awesome if you did! XD

Answer #3

maybe fix it up or maybe leave it because it is a classic work of prose as opposed to poetry.

maybe add to it or maybe leave it because it says everything right there.

some work is necessarily short.

but because it is short it needs to be in a book with several others…either yours or a compendium of other poets.

Answer #4

It’s very good. I think you should write more to it, fix it up a little and try and put it in for the contest at poetry.com!

Answer #5

I like it a lot.

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