Who can help me with my story?

I agree with the kidnapping story. it should unfold that the man once had a wife who passed away, and the girl who is pregnant resembles her heavily. Then, when she has the baby, he moves to another country with the baby. His old wife was pregnant and was killed in a car accident, so he takes the baby because he feels that this pregnant teen;s baby is his! Then comes the search to find the baby and the teacher in his foreign country. make it a really exotic country with strict immigration/emigaration laws so it is hard for the pregnant teen to get her baby back. hoep that helps a little :)

she says no thankyou and he kidnaps her. he keeps her locked away and when she has the baby he takes it and says its his…

Hmm, I think it would be cool if she takes him up on the offer but then finds out that he’s some sort of psycho, or serial killer, or…wait for it…he’s the father of her child. How? He raped her in the middle of the night or something. He has aways had an infatuation with her at school, and now forcing her to have a family with him is a diabolical plan. Ya, how about the chick never even finds out he raped her. Teh reader just knows that. She finds out at the end of the book, She thinks he’s a nice guy who she falls for, marries and raises a kid together, In the end, it was all part of his plan..

…she didn’t know what to say. What should she do- Move in with her teacher?! Then she remembered the other life which depended on her at that time, and realized that she had no choice. She needed to take any available option, to ensure that her child would be healthy and have a rightful chance at life.

So she stared into space for a moment, thinking quickly, and answered “‘umm- ok, but do I get my own bed or do I sleep on the couch?’” Mr. Newberg seemed a bit embarrassed for a fleeting second, and then said “‘Oh you can take my daughter’s room, she left for college a month ago. All of her old furniture is still there even.’”

I may have entirely destroyed the plot you had in mind, but It’s a fine example of my on demand free-writing. I hope you can use it =D

I may be able to puke up more, but then I might as well be co-author at that point =D. It’s up to you- let me know!

I really love story writing.Maybe this will help.

She should say yes,but find out that he’s crazy!! Or maybe something like she falls in love with him.I love making twists like that.If you need any more advice on the subject, kyannakrazy@yahoo.com ! :) +; Tell me when you publish it! I would like to read it sometime! :)

Hope this helped!

She should take her chances and maybe there should be a drama from there fun mail me for more ideas