Is this poem good?

Beautiful,am I? Beautiful. am I She says no! He says not really. The mirror is silently whispering his opinion that is never heard. I am brown skin. I am natural hair. I am beautiful smile. I am deep eyes. I am thick. I am me. And if you didn’t know_ me is in! And I’ll always be me! So when I ask me, Beautiful,am I? my answer will be yes, I am beautiful

tell me what you think!

Answer #1

I love this poem its really cool it shows other people are beautiful no matter what other peope think its great

Answer #2

dude your great I love it its amazing. all I can write about is ducks and like swanns lmao but dude I love it so much <3

Answer #3

OMG I LOVE IT!! It shows that no matter what people think what matters is what you think!! And that you’re beautiful no matter what!!! Great Job :)

Answer #4

beauty dose go far beyond apperances =) smile and thumbs up

Answer #5

this poem is awesome!!

Answer #6

this poem is awesome!! it even boosts my self-confidence a little :O good job ;)

Answer #7

I think its really good did you make that :)

Answer #8

Its really nice. I love it and you are such a great poet!!!

Answer #9

well I like it cause I’m brown beautiful & thick :)

Answer #10

Let me put it this way It only gets better the more you read it.

Very nice self motivational poem. Congratz. Have you written any other poems?

Answer #11

hey awesome poem, maybe you can do what I did. enter it I a poetry contest. I’m also wild for poetry. you can enter it in www.poetry.com. again, great poem!

Answer #12

nice lines, a good poem indeed. good job

Answer #13

It was great!

Answer #14

I love this your talented and creative keep it ^

Answer #15

gives many rounds of applause!!

Answer #16

This poem is beautiful! did you write it yourself?

Answer #17

Like it, made me :)

Answer #18

I told you this peom was a killer

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