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What do you think of my story, (Redone)?

I thought that my last story lacked a bit of detail, so I kept the same theme but just changed it around a little.

I was running down a dark corridor, I could barley see anything but outlines of things on the ground and sticking out of the wall, I ...

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What do you think of my storyline?

Too confusing?

I am a wanna-be author and my agent says she'll look into it if I can get an aspproved storyline; a sotryline other people will like. It's fantasy and kinda hard to follow... I hope you do!

Life story

In 1879, a pregnant wom...

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99 Things About You/Fun Survey

I wanna know more about as many funadvice members as possible. I told you, so now you tell me! XD

1. ONE OF YOUR SCARS, HOW DID YOU GET IT? my ankle, shaving. I'm dangerous with sharp objects.

2. WHAT IS ON THE WALLS IN YOUR ROOM? spiderwebs

3. DO ...

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For all who have or want an eating disorder

this isnt a question. this is some advice to all of the young people out there constantly asking advice for learning to develop an eating disorder. why on earth would you want to do that to yourself? I can understand pain. I can understand hurt I can u...

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To clear up errors with atheists

Hey, I am trey, I have no problems with atheist, I just want to clear things with them ( this is optional)

I made a list of proof that god exist
1. "god" means "creator of the physical universe."
2. Time passes, from the past, into the p...

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What do you think of the prologue to a story I was working on?

PROLOGUE

Soccer was always one of my best sports.

I was the keeper — everyone relied on me to keep our net safe. For my whole life I’d been accustomed to insane pressure of all sorts: shootouts, fights, exams, parties, girls... Girls were alway...

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Short story +updated+ *Horror/Gore/murder*

There are only 3 questions on everyone’s lips
They speak them in slurs, as though saying them confirms them, makes them more real. Simple words horrify them, disgusts them. Three perfectly innocent
questions. Who's next? Where? Why?
But they are devoi...

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