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How would you critique this short story I wrote not long ago?

My feet pounded upon the rocky road slicing my bare feet. Hammering in my chest my heart beat wildly. What have I done? Why do I precede to commit such acts of sin? The street lamps shinned a dim yellow illuminating the streets as I ran faster than I h...

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What do you think of my story, (Redone)?

I thought that my last story lacked a bit of detail, so I kept the same theme but just changed it around a little.

I was running down a dark corridor, I could barley see anything but outlines of things on the ground and sticking out of the wall, I ...

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Should I move out to keep my sanity, or stay and go nuts?

Hey Everyone,

Being the scape goat in the family I have been tormented, abused (physically, mentally, emotionally and any other way possible) and ripped to pieces inside over the years of my life. I am 18 very soon to be 19 and I am losing my sanity h...

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Messiah from Islam, Judaism, Christian?

Which is the real AntiChrist? Muslims? The Cristians? or the Jews?
Christians believe that the Messiah was Jesus, but Jews do not believe that. Christians believe that Jesus' claims to be God go against the beliefs of Judaism.

JUDAISM

The concept of...

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take a look at a part of my story...tell me what u think

The Drama-filled Life of Tamika Daniels
by Nakita Griffin

Chapter One: Still Depressed

Tamika lay in bed after a long cry. She wanted to call Ricki, who had become very supportive of her the last three days, but couldn't find the strength to ...

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take a look at a part of my story...tell me what u think

The Drama-filled Life of Tamika Daniels
by Nakita Griffin

Chapter One: Still Depressed

Tamika lay in bed after a long cry. She wanted to call Ricki, who had become very supportive of her the last three days, but couldn't find the strength to ...

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ANYONE INTERESTED IN READING THE FIRST PART TO MY NOVEL? SEE IF IT IS ANY GOOD?

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Chapter One, Defiance

“I don’t want to go to some stupid private school. I was happy where I was! Why can’t you ever just leave me alone?” I pleaded. I could tell by the expression on Paul, my uncles face, that no matter what I ...

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