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Asked by funadvice 9 months ago, 3 answers.

I think I'll call this your knife...

Past pain
Is future gain
The tears
Caused fears
You killed
My will

From the burn
I learned
To detect
And protect
The parts
Of my heart

You killed
What I built
Your pride
Wasted my time
My...

joy
Was your toy

Like your slave
I worked, I gave
My everything
For nothing
Your knife
Took my life...

I might add more, but that's what I have for now...

Answered by alkane on Feb 24, 2009, 07:50AM
522 answers

That is really good, please add more.

Answered by aubree4lyfe on Mar 13, 2009, 03:16PM
57 answers

wow your really amazing!!!

I love all your poems there amazing!

I think you should keep writing

I feel the same way about it too happy

Answered by minalae on Mar 23, 2009, 01:36AM
273 answers

wow awesome! I love how short the lines are, it really brings essence!! and you've used the exact word to capture everything!

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