You saved me... long poem

Alright, here is a poem I just finished writing. Please tell me what you think and what could be differant. what do I need to fix? thanks =)

You Saved Me

“I wanna die” *holding a gun to her head*
“Baby, you have your whole life to look forward to”
“I...

hate my life. I just wanna die” *tears rolling down face*
“Please no baby! Why do you wanna die?”
“Because my life sucks way more then imaginable and no one cares about me” *starts sobbing*
“I care!”
“I know ‘you’ do, but no one else does”
“Aren’t I enough?”
*becomes silent, lets her arm go limp and drops the gun to the floor.*
*He pulls her into his arms and holds her to his chest and whispers in her ear “I care baby! I care!”*

I’ve never had anybody care about me like you do
They all walk away and say I’m messed up in the head
But you stay by my side and help me through everything
If it wasn’t for you, I would be dead

I want to thank you for saving my life
And never walking away
Instead you always putting a smile on my face
Just like you did today

You know everything I have been threw
And you know how to make it alright
Well, at least when I am talking to you
Almost every single night

But I would rather have it alright for a few hours
Then never alright at all
And I do believe you care about me
Because you never let me fall

You make it seem like I belong in the world
No matter how sad or depressed I feel
You make everything bad go away for awhile
All my bad emotions, you steel

You have no idea how much you mean to me
Because there is no words in the world to explain it
You’re the reason I’m still living today
But I wish there was a way to prove it

I can never tell you how I feel
Because I can never find the right words to say
But I hope you know I love you
And I hope you’re here to stay

it's kind of bad...

no one is going to take the time to read all that on a site like this...

I strongly disagree with thee other two I for one love it, if is beautiful is that all you have written before do you write more I would love to hear thee rest if you do kus I like this one a lot..

well its pretty good!!!
you do need to make some changes though!!! but cute!!!

I really like it. But you can make some changes (:

I really like it. You explain the poem really well in the story which I like. It's good