What do you think of this song I wrote

You're left standing there like a fool, as you hear the door shut
This time you know that I ain't coming back
The realisation that you said one lie time too many hits home
You deserve this, you lied to me thats why I walked out
I just wants to let you know that I couldn't take it anymore
You're standing there, refusing to believe that I just let you go

Its all over, there's no more you and me
I'm gone, I put up with you as best as I could
The guilt will haunt you till the day you die
You'll never hear my voice or see my face again
Just live with the guilt of what you have done

I couldn't believe that this was nothing to you but a game
I cared about you, but you knew exactly how to play me
It hurt just as much knowing the lie and the truth were the same
You're never going to see me again, this games over

Its all over, there's no more you and me
I'm gone, I put up with you as best as I could
The guilt will haunt you till the day you die
You'll never hear my voice or see my face again
Just live with the guilt of what you have done

I'm walking down the street now, thoughts rushing through my mind
Was there really a you and me or was it all a lie and did I strike out
Do you remember the time that you said 'forever and ever till we die'
Well, you just killed me, looked down on my body and smiled
I'd do anything to turn back time and wish I'd never met you

Its all over, there's no more you and me
I'm gone, I put up with you as best as I could
The guilt will haunt you till the day you die
You'll never hear my voice or see my face again
Just live with the guilt of what you have done

All you ever said to me was nothing but a lie
Now you faced the consequences as I walked out of your life
I did what was best by me, theres only so much someone can take before they ask why.
You played the game, but I stopped playing before you could win and sorry to say but you lost

Its all over, there's no more you and me
I'm gone, I put up with you as best as I could
The guilt will haunt you till the day you die
You'll never hear my voice or see my face again
Just live with the guilt of what you have done

Its all over, there's no more you and me
I'm gone, I put up with you as best as I could
The guilt will haunt you till the day you die
You'll never hear my voice or see my face again
Just live with the guilt of what you have done

Can't really judge it without actually hearing it. Lyrics are so-so

Its pretty kl, sounds like you got beef on someone

I really like it, what genre will it be?

its awesome!

well its hard to tell without hearing it you know like the beats and rythm and stuff...but the lyrics are pretty good

I write songs too...comment mine

its pretty good I really like the line 'Do you remember the time that you said 'forever and ever till we die' keep it up just keep perfectiong them you could go places