What do you think of this poem? love/hate

Me Asked by cminor about 1 year ago, 9 answers.

Love...

Love is blind,
Love is bright,
Love can make you lose your sight/
Love can make you feel strange,
And love can fill your heart with pain,
Love can be the best emotion,
Love is deep just like the ocean,
Love is hard to understand,
Complicating...

where I stand,
Love can make you feel torn,
Love can make you feel adored,
Love can make the world seem great,
The end of love can begin hate,
Hate can make you feel angry,
Hate can halt your understanding,
Hate can make you insecure,
Hate can make your love no more,
Hate can take you many places,
Hate can ruin many faces,
Hate can make your life seem shitty,
I hate my life when things are gritty,
Hate can overlook the truth,
Hate can make a change in you,
Hate can make your days seem long,
Hate can ruin great love songs,
Songs can be both love and hate,
Like some people you may date,
Hate and love, are 2 emotions,
Usually neither one is chosen,
Love begins with a spark,
Hate will tear that spark apart,
Love will make you wear a smile,
And love can hurt you for a while,
Hate can make you wear a frown,
Hate can turn you inside out,
Love is what I long to have,
Hate is what will destroy that,
Love is awesome, it makes me happy,
Hate makes me think life is crappy,
I love love, and I hate hate,
Do you think it's odd,
That I feel this way?

I always rush my poems, so any critique is welcome happy

Me <  and maranda > Answered by ciara14 on Aug 09, 2008, 07:35PM
297 answers

Whoa!! Dats amazing!! I always just pass up poems 2 answer but I looked @ dis one and its amazing!! lol

Me Answered by cminor on Aug 09, 2008, 07:38PM
221 answers

lol I got to fix the line that ends in crappy too, I couldn't think of anything at the moment and I was kind of rushing it lol, thanks for the feedback, I'm glad to hear people like my work, it inspires me to do more.

Shark Atack Answered by funadvice on Aug 09, 2008, 07:40PM
53985 answers

I like it!! It's awesome!! happy

meeee Answered by camison on Aug 10, 2008, 06:49AM
30 answers

there is no critique needed that was amazing!!!

me at the beach :) Answered by loulou11 on Aug 10, 2008, 04:02PM
1063 answers
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it was so good
you're a great writer :]

chanel <3 Answered by xmorganx on Aug 10, 2008, 07:10PM
19 answers

wow your really talented. thats an awesome poem =]

be Answered by jazz03 on Aug 14, 2008, 12:31PM
206 answers

two snaps two snapps...that was awesome

idk? haha Answered by bubbles0990 on Dec 11, 2008, 07:06PM
577 answers

amazing!!!:]]]

me Answered by missshortyfly22 on Jul 26, 2009, 07:25PM
68 answers

its so true

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