What do you think of this poem?

It's not that great but ya know...

*Never Ment to Be*
There he goes
Her one true love,
The guy who won't leave her head.
And the guy she thinks of
Right before she goes to bed.
She wishes she had the courage to tell him,
But she doesn't think she ever will.
She'll never be able to get over that hill.
If she did life would be grand,
But that is not what she has planned.
Neither has he,
It was never ment to be.
He has a life of his own,
Sohe leaves her all alone.
She knows not to get her hopes up,
But she still gets a feeling,
Like a high,
When he passes by,
Or when he just says 'Sup'.
Neither of them has the courage to say anything,
So this is the way it will stay.
Neither of them will have to risk a thing,
So none of them will have to pay.
Like I said before,
As you can see,
It was never ment to be.

Please let me know what you think!!!

I really like it

That was sssooo awesome!

I licke the poem its verry intrasting.good job girl

its sooo awesome!!! good job!!