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What do you think of this poem?

This is Me Asked by darkwolfgirl240 7 months ago, 6 answers.

Her eyes

Her eyes are looking at me, as I look

Back I see the pain. The feeling of despair,

Is so evident but know one else seems to notice.

I can see her anguish, her suffering it is almost to much to bear.

She is trapped in a world in which no one understands.

She is fighting to survive each day is harder then the day before.

Why doesn't any one else see this?

I want to help her but I feel restrained by some unknown force.

Her pain is so over whelming I am still looking into her eyes.

I can't turn from them. They are so foreign and yet so familiar.

I can feel her anguish. The pain takes hold and will not release me.

It pulls me into the empty void this terrible reality witch is her world.

A world she can not relinquish her self from.

Finally I am able to blink my eyes and she is still looking back at me in the mirror.

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<333 Answered by ana_antidrug on Dec 30, 2007, 10:27AM
| 154 answers.

The last two lines,
stand out the most.
(To me at least)

Very enjoyable.

me Answered by winsten16 on Dec 30, 2007, 10:49AM
| 358 answers.

wow its preety good!

me Answered by winsten16 on Dec 30, 2007, 10:49AM
| 358 answers.

wow its preety good!

looking rather.. strange XD Answered by stellaapplemoor on Dec 30, 2007, 11:02AM
| 838 answers.

Wow.. that's amazing. I feel like I am 'Her'. Did you write this?

xxx

shut up and drive!!! Answered by lovermeforever666 on Dec 30, 2007, 11:23AM
| 244 answers.

that's deep

:] Answered by faggette_7 on Dec 30, 2007, 11:52AM
| 235 answers.

I agree with loverme...
this is deep and awsome :]

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