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What do you think of this poem?

Asked by fau 5 months ago, 3 answers.

The petals will fall away,

The color will surely fade.

With each petal falling,

does the stem feel betrayed?

Each petal does fly away,

leaving the stem to stand alone.

Standing naked and alone,

surely now for its sins it will atone.

And the stem asks, "Why did the petals flee?"

"Perhaps on some point we did disagree?"

But thats no reason to leave,

no reason to leave the stem to bleed.

It did nothing to deserve this,

Nothing to make the petals dismiss.

And now the stem stands slowly dying,

All it can do is keep on crying.

For at one time it was a beautiful rose,

But now its chapter time did close.

Be honest, I want to know your thoughts on it. Do you think its ok?

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black and white self portrait Answered by ana_luna on Apr 17, 2008, 07:26AM
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I liked it. I actually really liked it. but Im also a depressive so Im not sure if my opinion is valid.

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Answered by fau on Apr 17, 2008, 07:28AM
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Nah I was depressed when I wrote it so I take your opinion into account.

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Answered by avenged_sevenfold_rules on Apr 17, 2008, 09:53AM

I think that was a great poem I love poetry like this
The glacier knocks in the copboard,
The desert sighed in the bed,
The crack in the teacup opens,
a lane to the land of the dead

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