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I like it a lot!
its pretty weird just because it explains exactly what I'm going through haha.
I like it a lot. you are a really good writer.
aww thank you!!!
I love writing about things other people can relate to!
your opinion means a lot to me
I LOVE IT. It relates to me so much. It´s like you sort of opened your heart and made it into this beautiful poem. I really liked the outline and how it sounds when you read it out loud. It has a rhythm to it, if you know what I mean 
You really just put out all of these feelings and put them together into a poem that´s so strong in emotion but subtle at the same time 
Keep it UP!
I didn't like much the first lines, but then I realized that your poem is really great, honestly. in my opinion, better then the previous ones






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I don't write many love poems. I usually write depressing ones, if you check my questions area, you'll see. but this is one I just wrote. what do you think? be honest.
'Your the one'
it's not over, your still waiting
for a sincere apology,
but words can not express
how much you'll ever mean to me.
your the sunshine I look up to,
your the one who dries my tears,
your the one I want to be with
for many, many years.
your the one I hurt the most
your the one who's heart I broke,
you didn't think I'd listen
to a single word you spoke.
but babe, I heard it all
from the inside, to the out,
your the only one
I hate to be without.
now let's go back a little,
let's pause.. can we rewind?
how could I be so stupid,
how could I be so blind?
the biggest mistake I made
was ever letting go
I'm sorry for the past,
I won't stop, till you know.
so please, just hear me out
your the one I want to love
and your the one... the ONLY one
I'm EVER thinking of.