What do you think of this poem?

ONE MORE DAY; If I were granted one more day to spend alone with you I,d say the things I should have said and l;ddo all I wanted to do. I,d tell you that I love you. Did I tell you that before? Or did I just take it for granted that you,d walk...

through the door? I,d play all the games you asked me to play, but I was to busy, you see, I,m sorry for the times I wasn,t there, now, I wish you were here for me. I'd tell you I miss you so very much. You've been gone forever, it seems, and I still hope that one of these days I'll wake from this terrible dream. If one more day were given to me to tell the things I'd say, the only thing I'd want after that, would be just one more day.

I like it - keep on writing. Was this a personal true life poem? Just curious, whenever you write about real experiences, they always come out good.

I like it!!

It's very good. The sentences have substance. I like it!