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What do you think of this poem?

Random Flower Asked by britz14 6 months ago, 6 answers.

Hey. I am quite proud of this, something I thought up in the night just before I went to sleep. I may be proud of it, but I'd like to ask others opinions, just to see if I should be.

The wind chases itself,
around my curtains,
darting playfully,
in and out.
The wind is everywhere,
running its finger of chill down my spine,
whispering sweet nothings in my ear.
The wind and I are good friends,
For what are friends but those that enjoy each others company?
That,
The wind and I do.

Thanks for reading, and hopefully commenting,
Britz

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me at grad Answered by mizzsmith on Jan 08, 2008, 04:10PM
| 40 answers.

that was good you should put it on poetry.com

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67 Answered by iluvzacefron123 on Jan 08, 2008, 03:03PM
| 52 answers.

that was good

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me Answered by lifeis2short4nonsense94 on Jan 08, 2008, 03:21PM
| 37 answers.

that's good

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Answered by dracoalba on Jan 08, 2008, 04:07PM
| 122 answers.

I really like it.

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Cool Hampster Picture Answered by rockingrl728 on Jan 08, 2008, 04:15PM
| 246 answers.

I love it! That's a really pretty poem.

I hope you post up more.

Hey ya'll, sup! Answered by persuadednot on Jan 08, 2008, 05:03PM
| 14 answers.

It's good I like writing poerty too. I especially like to write poems about water, any kind of water, rain, bodies of water, puddles, pretty much any kind. oh, and things that you can't see. Like (wind), breath, time, ect. Post some more I definintly read them! Good job

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