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What do you think of this poem?

Me on the rockss Asked by britz14 about 1 year ago, 5 answers.

Hey. I am quite proud of this, something I thought up in the night just before I went to sleep. I may be proud of it, but I'd like to ask others opinions, just to see if I should be.

The wind chases itself,
around my curtains,
darting playfully,
in...

and out.
The wind is everywhere,
running its finger of chill down my spine,
whispering sweet nothings in my ear.
The wind and I are good friends,
For what are friends but those that enjoy each others company?
That,
The wind and I do.

Thanks for reading, and hopefully commenting,
Britz

me at grad Answered by mizzsmith on Jan 08, 2008, 04:10PM
41 answers

that was good you should put it on poetry.com

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67 Answered by iluvzacefron123 on Jan 08, 2008, 03:03PM
52 answers

that was good

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me Answered by lifeis2short4nonsense94 on Jan 08, 2008, 03:21PM
44 answers

that's good

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Answered by dracoalba on Jan 08, 2008, 04:07PM
116 answers

I really like it.

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Cool Hampster Picture Answered by rockingrl728 on Jan 08, 2008, 04:15PM
221 answers

I love it! That's a really pretty poem. happy

I hope you post up more.

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