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What do you think of this poem..

Asked by chloepierson 2 months ago, 5 answers.

Its for someone.

Emotions after Emotions...
Controlling them inside of me.
I'm a girl in love.
Love is one thing that overcomes me.
My heart softens when I am in love.
Risk is what you take when u're in love.
Tears stream down my face when I...

see him sad.
But what can I do? I'm in love with u.
Smile darling smile.
Don't be sad.
For I am with u...day and night.
I comfort you and make sure that u'll be alright.
you may not know how I feel, but its alright.
All I want is to see you smile.
Darling, just forget about her.
you know you derserve better.
Give others a chance to love you
And you will find the love, that u've been longing for.

Answered by zackixxx on Sep 10, 2009, 07:32PM
42 answers

I love it

Answered by roxyrumble on Sep 10, 2009, 07:33PM
614 answers

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Good job

Answered by livelovelaugh19 on Sep 10, 2009, 10:50PM

its a poem I can kinda relate to its good but love and tear you down and others to so look at what your doin and if its meant to be you will be in love together the part where you said something about another girl if he really has those feelings for you then I think you cant stop love

Answered by missunique19 on Sep 12, 2009, 12:05AM
60 answers

niceee

Answered by llcoolclint on Sep 14, 2009, 07:48PM
274 answers

awesome christel Emotions after Emotions...
Controlling them inside of me Love is one thing that overcomes me.
My heart softens when I am in love.
Risk is what you take when u're in love.
Tears stream down my face when I see him sad.
But what can I do? I'm in love with u.
Smile darling smile.
Don't be sad.
For I am with u...day and night.
I comfort you and make sure that u'll be alright. I love those parts the most