What do you think of this poem?

Please give some honest feedback! Its about a girl whose father is a drunk...

I came home to find you sitting there,
with hatred in your eyes.
I did not know just what I did,
why I believed all the lies.
It wasn't another bad day at work
or another fight with mom,
You promised to just have one drink,
you promised to stay calm.
Yet I came home to see the bottle
empty on the floor.
Why does it make you so angry?
Why don't you love me anymore?
You say I am ungrateful,
you say I'm not worth what you give.
You wonder why you brought me here
and why you let me live.
I go upstairs again,
the tears not unknown,
I wonder when you will put that bottle down
and my daddy will come home.
The next night is the same,
yet one more bottle wasted,
more anger building up
and one more drink tasted.
You say that you will stop
but you do not tell me when,
you leave me here to wonder
when this nightmare will end.

that is a really good poem... it has a lot of meaning to it ...xxx wb

that is really good its great hugs and kisses xoxoxoxoox pooka

That was really good. You are a really good writer. =]

did you plan on getting it published with the big book store? cause if you got it published I would buy at least three copies and hand them to friends and other people who would be interested in your writting.

oh my gosh!! that is one of the best poems I have ever heard!! wow! you should be a poet or something. but that poem is kind of sad. sorry to hear that if its true about your life...