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Is this poem cheesy?

Asked by valearia about 1 year ago, 4 answers.

It is kinda like a poem, but I don't know. Do you think it is cheesy??
I think it is...but I don't know:

If the one you love,
doesn't love you back,
your still an angel,
in someone's else's eyes.

Answered by kneck1 on Jan 08, 2008, 01:12AM
12 answers

I reacon its sweet and really good!!

Answered by editor (Online now) on Jan 08, 2008, 01:49AM
8964 answers

It's nice but change your to you're.

Your = possessive (ie. your shirt)
You're = contraction, equals you are (ie. you're still an angel)

Answered by underwaterophelia on Jan 08, 2008, 12:59PM
1841 answers

It's cliche, and not really saying anything.
Cute, though.

Answered by arab07 on Jan 09, 2008, 04:56AM
39 answers

yea sweet really ...

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