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What do you think of my poem?

shut up and drive!!! Asked by lovermeforever666 6 months ago, 5 answers.

it all seams like a scary dream that never wants to leave,

it's haunting me in my dreams

and everyone is inside it.

it's as if your dead to my head

but not to my heart even though I wish you really were.

yea, you need to listen.

you've broken my heart and now you want to do it all over again.

yea, you need to be there.

thrown it on the ground, ripped it to peices. No, never again.

Why do I always let you do this to me?

I'de say it's because I love you but, it's breaken me inside.

it all needs to end real soon.

You need to better yourself and.

yea, you need to listen

you've broken my heart and now you want to do it all over again.

yea, you need to be there.

thrown it on the ground, ripped it to peices. No, never again.

tell me if it's good..I wrote it myself..let me know what it makes you think of..

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sumo kid owns mom Answered by xylitolisluxurious on Jan 07, 2008, 06:24PM
| 121 answers.

hey someone else wrote this poem before, because I remember it -_- same exact words if I recall correctly

shut up and drive!!! Answered by lovermeforever666 on Jan 07, 2008, 06:25PM
| 244 answers.

it was probably me..I've posted this before

me Answered by winsten16 on Jan 07, 2008, 07:16PM
| 358 answers.

sad and preety good

me Answered by kneck1 on Jan 08, 2008, 01:19AM
| 13 answers.

I didint really like it I guess its okay?

Answered by harley_shultz on Jan 08, 2008, 09:34AM
| 22 answers.

like it

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