What do you think of my 1st full rap song

I was growin up in a small town with nutin to do
Always takin s**t from people, who the f**k are you
We got all these rules see we dont abide by them so whats the point in havin them if we dont stand by them
Start hearin how people dont beleive in me...

I just want to say peace to all the people ya see
Im gonna be famous take a look at me
Mother f**kers here I come , so fresh to be
(Chorus)
I got a point in life always takin never givin took things for granted now I see I wasnt thinking
I want things to be normal,no more guns and knifes
I want to big house,sweet car living the good life
(Verse 2)
When my heads so full of s**t I cant think
A just sit in my room thinking of all the bad s**t and start putting down ink
Its possible to make a change if your willing to pay your way but oppertunities dont come around everyday
If you want to do something go out and do it a wanted to do something a have to admit
No one else can tell you this it comes from my own experience
Living liee with no fear rappin and drinking beer who'd of thought my rhymes would get me all the way here.
(Chorus)
(Verse 3)
Does it matter if I go to school every f**king day to learn s**t am not gona use anyway
I gotta keep it real you know how I do
Theres no point in going so come follow me too
Im living life on the edge,man this aint how it should be I gotta get paid the big bucks ya'll feel me
But being famous is the only way to be imma follow my dreams and neves gonna give up
Bi**h im the f**king king so ima mess this s**t up
(Chorus)
(Verse 4)
You should know I've been livin this life too long everything I've done so far's been wrong
Somehow I lost my courage along the way
I seem to lose sence of right and wrong everyday
Mabey I just got led astray
Whats the point in life whats the meaning of living always takin and never givin
You dont like how am livin we'll f**k you am a bad motherf**ker a'l beat you black and blue
As am trying to get my life sorted its like a got transported back into the world of love and hate f**k naw back into the world of guns and caine
(Chorus x2)

So what do you think of my 1st full rap be honest and truthful thanx peace ?

Its very good! (Better than lil wayne and the soulja anyway)

It really is good! But you need a good beat to accompany

pretty good keep it up

wow. that was incredible. I've taken a new liking to rap and I loved it so much. It was beyong amazing.

That was pretty good, keep it up!

It's awesome, I really like it. Now you just need to lay it down to a sick beat!

this one is a lot better I like it.