What do you think about this poem?

This is just a poem I wrote about a friend that moved away!

Five months ago, when we had our first glance
Talking to me, you took that chance
Friends we became
But the way he talked about it was so lame
And his singing was so bad
Just thinkning about...

it, missing it, its making me sad
They say friendship will never been torn apart
Him being gone brings pain to my heart
He was the only one who did talk to me
Telling me what lifes like after high school, it made me open my eyes and see
Its not as bad as it seems
Just dont let anyone keep you from following your dreams
I will never forget that conversation
That one that put me in hesitation
I didnt know what to say
Weird for me but it happened that way
He helped me when I felt bad
And allergies was all I had!
Hes the one that will last to the end
I will always remember him as my friend!

Thats really good ^_^

WoOoOoOoW really it's so nice and I hope you see him again

yes its great.

Wow, it is great! The first 7 lines actually relates to me...But yea, its really great!

that was good!!!

that is so beautiful, I had chills, I also know extremely well wut it's like to have a friend move away, I also know wut it's like from the point of view of the person who moves away(me=(