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What do you think of my song?

Verse 1

I don’t want to be alone no more I want to open up my door And show the people that I care The feelings that I hold inside

Chorus

I want someone new I want some one to come home to I want someone new I want some one to love and hold

Verse 2

I don’t want to be alone no more I want to get this over with All the night with a half used bed With no one here to fill my head

Chorus

I want someone new I want some one to come home to I want someone new I want some one to love and hold

Bridge So when will this day come to be When I let my feelings out And you fill up that empty space Which belonged to the ex called bicth

Chorus

I want someone new I want some one to come home to I want someone new I want some one to love and hold

Bits I had but took out off the song:

I don’t want to be alone no more I want to let you know this I’m over her and all for you

Im 15 and this is my second song I have ever written its probaly rubbish but I just thought ill get your opinions on it.

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