What do you think of my song?
Verse 1
I don’t want to be alone no more I want to open up my door And show the people that I care The feelings that I hold inside
Chorus
I want someone new I want some one to come home to I want someone new I want some one to love and hold
Verse 2
I don’t want to be alone no more I want to get this over with All the night with a half used bed With no one here to fill my head
Chorus
I want someone new I want some one to come home to I want someone new I want some one to love and hold
Bridge So when will this day come to be When I let my feelings out And you fill up that empty space Which belonged to the ex called bicth
Chorus
I want someone new I want some one to come home to I want someone new I want some one to love and hold
Bits I had but took out off the song:
I don’t want to be alone no more I want to let you know this I’m over her and all for you
Im 15 and this is my second song I have ever written its probaly rubbish but I just thought ill get your opinions on it.
its kinda gay and stupid no offense though try to write screemo emo music!
I think that it is drifferent keep on trying!!
caitie1994
that is a very good song!!! you otta write more!!!
I like it but UGH! everyone and love songs!
well read it in a screemo voice
NICE!