What do you think

Its called flag of pain

I have expierience on my side
As I prepare for battle
I wave my flag of pain

Pain makes you stronger
Makes you better
Makes you wiser

I went through much suffering
My hatred grew stronger
I became an avenger

I made myself...

perfect
Drivin by hate
Drivin by pain

I turn and face my opponent
He is big
He is strong

He shows no mercy
His brutality is great
I have never expierienced so much pain

I taste blood
My ears ring
And the ground becomes red

How could this be
I was perfect
And now I am helpless

I was uterlly defeated
My bones crushed
My heart broken

Expierience wasnt enough
Hate wasnt enough
And now I yet again
Wave my flag of pain

Please give me an honest opinion and really sorry about spelling
I was in a hurry

Real gud!!!

Spend alittle more time organizing your lines..other then that its fantastic!