What do you think about my poem?

woah this is really deep I love it mma read it again geez I’m going to call like scholastic or something lol

so strong and deep, plus it’s filled with emotions! I swear you can enter this in a contest - if you know of any :P it’s real powerful and I’m sure many can relate to the situation! keep writing, you’re real talented =)

I…LUV IT!!!

Have you ever heard of Mibba.com?

Check it out! It’s a creative writing web site,(I have an account btw =) ) where you can post your poems,articels,storys,etc. you’d fit in very well my dear. ^_^

what happend to that rythms and all lol you a good writer speaking from da braini like that but I guess you could do better by looking around you hearing the sounds take it from your heart not da brain lke this: (look for a poem Name : To a pretty girl) looking forward to your advice

I like it but I think a good thing to add to every poem is more discriptive like pensive and stuff like that. A wonderful poem but I know in my work I try to use that little edge. your a great writer.

I like it 2 thumbs up lol

Its wonderful! I can’t stop saying that you’re a great writer! KEEP IT UP!!!

You definately are a girl born with a pen in hand, beautiful writting, & so true, hugs to you my dear, Summerrainn

It’s a nice poem I like it :)

wow. thats a nice poem…very strong..and stuff. lol. but its an AWESOME poem!!!

I love it. it is very expressive