What you think of this song i wrote?

Guardian Angel

Written by: Austin Pettis

I’m waiting for the touch
The touch of a thousand angels
The touch that you give
The touch you give to me

You embrace me like an idol
Yet you love me like a child
I love you like my mother
Just like...

you love your mother

You hold me
For the days that I need you
And let me go
On the days I can walk alone
I love you with all my heart
And my still living soul

We let this pass
Day on
Day off
Your gentle touch keeps me going
Until the bitter end

But even in the end I shall be with you
For you are my guardian angel
And I am yours forever

its so cute (:

awww thats very sweet.
very good song dude =]

thnx its dedicated to a friend of mine, whom means so much to me.

WOW!!! im not even kidding thats pretty good I liked it

thnx, for some reason I think most of my songs suck but every one I've made have been good to other peopole, I've made like a hundred songs lol, and ya its wierd :p

Thhnx Fadedxphotos

its good, im a song writer as well, I dont know what kinda person you are but I usually use deeper words, just advice for the next song you write. if you want an example fun mail me and we'll share thoughts ^.^

thnx ill do that sometime

ok =)

Good work! It shows that you have true talent when it comes to music, just like me and lots of other people hehe
I like it a lot

thnx a lot, well music is basically all I have, and I plan to have a carrer in music,. I play music on a lot of intruments, and ya I enjoy it a lot

you rock

thnx shikaino, I plan to rock later in my life :p

Your very welcome! I enjoy music very much too. I don't play any instruments yet, though I'd like to learn guitar and drums sometime, but I'm really good at singing.

I sing play guiotar and drums. lol

NICE!