Want to see some of my writing??

I have seen all kinds of poems posted here on funadvice, what do you think of this one?

Ode to the righteous

It was your intent from your conception
To dominate the world through fear and deception
How many deities are there?
You would kill if...

the answer was more than one
follow our beliefs, be conquered or die
Fighting your holy wars
Fornicating with your black and white cloaked 'horrors'
Spreading your pestilence to the world
In the name of a solitary god
Your war machine is hurled
can you show me you are right?
Without threatening your military might?
Can you stand by and watch mankind be free
To worship as they choose and have different beliefs
Or will you try to change me as your predecessors have done
And write your new 'holy book', a book inked in blood
The blood of innocents who resisted your 'revelations'
Who would not follow your god, or join your bickering denominations
You call us heathens, pagans , savages and brutes
Can you bear it to think that evil and deceit
Has found a permanent home within you.

You have my applause...well done.

Wow! Bwolf, I AM IMPRESSED!
Didn't know you had it in ya'---fantastic!