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Another peoem that needs a name please

Asked by lovemachine 5 months ago, 3 answers.

ok I've been writing poetry and this is my newest one. I need help picking a title. some feed back would be nice! thanks... Note: this is copywritten... do not take my work or I will take legal action if I find out... thanks =D

When I see you walking...

around,
I can't even make a simple sound,
without a stammering voice,
falling in love was not my choice,
but you made my heart round,
and we'll never hit the ground,
you make me rejoice,
and I cant wait to hear your voice,

so falling in love I do not regret,
and you can be sure I'll never forget,
all the good times we had,
and how we worked through the sad,
so please don't be upset,
and don't give up yet,
because giving up is bad,
so don't go my lovely comrade,

because a love like ours can't be broken,
no matter what words are spoken,
so though the times are rough,
please just be tough,
and though there may be other women,
it's with you I want to share a coffin,
so just brush off the fluff,
and don't get in a big huff,

cause I can't live without you,
but there is nothing I can do,
so we can be together,
except wait until October,
but my love for you is true,
a love like our you will find few,
so let me be your night in shining armor,
I'll sweep you off your feet in a blur,

Tseirpeht and wife. Answered by tseirpeht on Jun 27, 2009, 09:04PM
1163 answers

Beautiful poem, Allegiance of Love? But I am not a poet I am sure you could probably come up with somthing more suitable.

twilight Answered by miscegenymiser (Online now) on Jun 28, 2009, 02:15AM
522 answers

Here are my suggestions:

***Lick my Love Pump***
***Rock of Love***
***Flavor of Love***
***It's Hard Out Here for a Pimp***
***2001... a Love Odyssey***

Or... ***Ode on a Grecian Urn*** I had intended on using this title for the poem I am still constructing... but I don't mind sharing it.

a photo Answered by forever_more on Jul 11, 2009, 10:07PM
56 answers

hhhmmm, how about something like...

*In Shining Armor

*A Love Oh So Rare

*Through The Good and The Bad

*Until October

*Please Don't Give Up

*A Coffin To Share

these are all that I could think of -I hope you like them- BTW nice poem.

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