Thoughts please?

tell me what you think please!

Accidents happen when you're f*ucking drunk by me : )

There’s no hope when you put them down like that
You’re smashing all their dreams
There’s no reason for the abuse you give
I hope you know you’re sorry when they leave
Pushed around but not mistaken
I always knew you were the one to drop my heart

You won’t wake up this time
We’ll just sleep your life away
From all this damage that you have caused
Oh, you know you’re in a coma

If only the clock turned back for real
We wouldn’t feel sorry at this point in life
Praying by the bed for so many nights to come
You know the answer is a knife
For all the damage that you have done
I know that we’ll be wishing that we could feel

You won’t wake up this time
We’ll just sleep your life away
From all this damage that you have caused
Oh, you know you’re in a coma

No waking up this time*
You’ll sleep the sleep of death
No waking up this time*
Wishing for one last breath
No waking up this time*
You’ll cry for me when I’m gone
No waking up this time*
You’ll never see another dawn

Oh, you know you’re in a coma
You know you’re in a coma
Know you’re in a coma*
You’re in a…coma

wow, I love it... might I ask if its a song or a poem though?

Is there any particular reason it has to has the word f***ing in the title? I am going to try a little honesty here and say I didnt really think it was that great. Should I brace myself for hate funmails? Im really just trying to be honest. I think it sounds a little like your not letting your full emotions and feelings into it. Your holding back. Try to let it out..