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The me inside

Asked by informer_220 11 months ago, 4 answers.

What you see aint what you get
What may be, is not what is
I am me, the one who hides
In the layers, deep inside
Where my dark core rests
Will you be the one who tests
If it still beats or if it still rests
Walk the path of ice and fire
In the end my...

soul is for hire
Dire the path may seem
Dont turn back, walk forward into the unseen
What may be is not what is
Walk the path to finally find peace
In my arms, in the silent bliss
For you I savor a kiss...

Answered by funadvice on Dec 15, 2008, 01:31PM
53738 answers

I like that. I really good!

Answered by niceguy08 on Dec 15, 2008, 01:34PM
14 answers

very nice. I like it.

Answered by offspringfan08 on Dec 15, 2008, 01:35PM
205 answers

that is excellent! I give it a 10. keep up the good work.

Answered by maddie1414 on Dec 15, 2008, 01:57PM
463 answers

I like it. happy good ideas, but some of the lines are off sync. (like, it doesn't flow when you read it aloud) maybe this is just your style. for example: where my dark core rests other than that it's realllyyy good. :D