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The darkest day (the fool)

fo' shizzle Asked by informer_220 2 months ago, 2 answers.

The darkest day begins today
No more laughter, it all flew away
On the wind that came to play

My hands broken, my feet cold
I feel oh so very old

Missing your smile
Wishing to die
All I can do now is lay down and cry

Where have you gone, oh goddess of...

peace
Are trying to make my life cease?
Is it your wish for me to end?
Did I not please you with all the love I send

Did your heart not thaw with the words of my soul
Or was it broken, so long ago
I will wait here in darkness for you to return
And if not, I promise I will surely burn

So come quickly back to me
Oh what magnificent beauty you are to see

~loneliness is immortal, foolishness can die, but waiting for your loved one is a thorn in each eye~

Me - Created by maggot4 (Raven) Answered by ichibanarky on Sep 22, 2009, 09:00AM
9056 answers
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Completely heart-wrenching...fabulous work, Kal.

Fruitylicious Answered by fruitylicious (Online now) on Sep 27, 2009, 04:59AM
757 answers

OMGGG did you made that poem up yourself??? If so, holy cow that was good.

Damn that poem would be awesome on Facebook ' I love my boyfriend' fan page. happy ...hint, hint, wink, wink...this Aussie missy wants to borrow it.

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