Story advice?

This is for a comic strip competition, it has to include something about education wether its advice or solving puzzles
Its a story about 4 heroes, math-ew, dr reed, dr wright and im thinking of a science one but not yet , the story is of dr reed...

leaving her books and notes and she cant seem to remember or do anything without them, the four friends are walking home from school when they hear a loud noise, they discover its a monster, it picks up mathew, wr wright and the science one, leaving dr reed, its up to her, the friends tell her to believe in herself and try to remember, she does saves the friends and destroys the monster , moral of the story is that with revision at hand, and if you believe in yourself you can tackle anything no matter how big the problem is.
Any more ideas or advice or feedback you could give is much appreciated.