Song lyrics I wrote

Tell me what you think. I havent perfected it yet but I think I have a prtty good beat for it in my head...its called

One more chance

Right then. I saw you, when you saw me
And right then I knew you were the one
But right then you tried to hide your curiosity...
So right now. I know we'll never be

When I look around and see all of the possoblilities
Its hard for me to not just stop and stare
And when I look around its hard for me to take it all in
But now that im with you. It seems to come more naturally

And right then. I saw you try to stand and walk away
But that was. So fooolish of you
So right now. You need me more then you ever have before
Because now your making a big mistake

Come back baby well take it slow
Theres no no need to rush again
Come back baby come with me
Well make it happen gradually

And right now were happier then we have ever been before
And right now I know that I was right...all along
And right now I have never felt this sure in my whole life
But just then you lost my trust...again(emphasis on the -gain and hold it out)

pretty good I love to write songs that was good

that was awsome rok on dude

wow that was very cool!!
I was even imagining a tune in my head hehe