Scary or not?

There
Was
This girl
And she
Was with
Her friend.
They were looking through peoples
Myspaces.
The girl slowly came upon this one
Myspace.
It had creatures in the background and
The man looked like a psycho.
She started laughing with her friend
Commenting...

on how ugly he was.
Right then, an instant message came
Up.
It said:

Satanstalker: so how do you like my
Myspace?

Xxlovemexx: what?

Xxlovemexx: who is this anyway?

Satanstalker: well, you should know;
Youre looking at my myspace right now.

Xxlovemexx: how do you know?

Satanstalker:I know
I know when
People look at my myspace.

Xxlovemexx: what? That doesnt make
Any sense, how?

Satanstalker: I just do.

Satanstalker: especially to pretty
Girls like you.

Satanstalker: with very nice legs I
Might say.
At the time the girl was wearing high
Shorts
She started to pull them down a little
Bit to cover what ever she could
Her and her friend started to get
Worried now.

Xxlovemexx: ok whatever man youre
Starting to scare me.

Satanstalker: you should be afraid.

Satanstalker: you wouldnt want an ugly
Guy like me touching your legs huh? I
Mean thats what you just said about me
With your friend like a minute ago.

They were in shock.
Her friend: holy crap man just block
Him hes a freaking psycho!

The girl: ok holy crap, you think hes
Watching us?

Satanstalker: I am.

Satanstalker: well it wouldnt really
Matter if you blocked me anyway; it
Wouldnt stop me from coming to your
House

Xxlovemexx: what? My house?

Satanstalker: yeah, youre alone so its
Not a problem.

Xxlovemexx: ok I think im going to
Leave now because youre freaking me
Out.

Satanstalker: your screen name says
Love me, trust me that wont be a problem

Satanstalker has just signed off.

The girl and her friend were really
Scared.

Girls friend: whatever lets just go
Upstairs trust me I doubt hes really
Coming. Its just a joke from someone.
They went upstairs and were
Having a pillow fight.

All of a sudden
The girlfriends said she had to go to
The bathroom.
The girl said ok.
Ten minutes later the girl noticed
That her
Friend
Was
Still in the bathroom and was wondering
What
Was
Up.

She goes and knocks but no one said
Anything

She opens it and finds her friend
There on
The
Ground dead.
She started to scream but
When
She
Turned around he was there.he
Next
Morning the news said that there was one girl
Dead
In
The
Bathroom; her neck sliced with blood
All
Over
The
Ground.
With her head nailed to the
Wall.
Just
Her head.

quite scary I spose, if it was to happen in real life. Why???

And I bet they found a hook in the handle of the cardoor too...lol

lovely story...lol
kinda creepy

Lol, Gcumbr

No, not scary :S
Sorry...

The writing is not good either.

Gah!
Im home alone now!
EKkkk now im scaredd

yea itz kinda scary at first but then it getz less scary at the end but yea itz a good story =]

It's kinda scary it could be better try to rewrite it.

No its not scrary it takes a lot more to scare me...but it a good story just work on it a little babe and keep up the good work