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What do you think of my poem?

Me n My GF Asked by penguin26 about 1 year ago, 4 answers.

A Heart's Lament

At one point in life, you had me at hello
You were the happiness in my life
But then all you caused was pain
All you made me feel was lament
All you did was me ask myself
Why? and How?
Why did I meet you?
How could I have fallen for...

you?
I loved you and wanted you
I couldn't live without you
But now you choose to live without me
But I don't care
Now I'm really happy
Once . . . a long time ago
You had me on my knees
But now that I've changed
I will never crawl for you
You had your chance at a happy life with me
But now you're with someone else
And threw that all away

jesse Answered by nareena on Mar 25, 2008, 05:13PM
74 answers

that was simply awesome that was great

jesse Answered by nareena on Mar 25, 2008, 05:13PM
74 answers

that was simply awesome that was great

Shark Atack Answered by funadvice on Mar 25, 2008, 05:14PM
53862 answers

that fantastic... you could so plaay aound with that.. like put it into a thrid person.. or a song.. that FANTASTIC!!! your a natural!!!

Again<3 Answered by chey on Mar 25, 2008, 09:22PM
56 answers

Wow, you could become a really good poet. :]
Really nice. 33.

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