Poems, are they good?

Hi I wrote some poems, I'm not sure if they are good or not.

As I glanced upon her
Shining like the Sun
Something ticked within me
And told me to have fun
Then I went to see her
Sitting on a bench
But before I could get close
There was a thirst I had to quench
This missing piece inside my heart
This hole that never ends
I wondered how to fill this hole
And how to make amends.
No matter how much I try
Inside me I can't help but cry
Nothing that I do or try
could ever make me rectify
The feelings that are within me.

On the Beach I see your glow
Your body makes the oceans flow
Your eyes light up like the starlit sky
When I hold you I touch the sky
Your smile glows like the moon
I hope to see you very soon
When nightfall comes I think of you
Your image comforts me when I’m blue
You’re the only thing that’s on my mind.
Your gracious looks are oh so kind.
When we’re apart I’m ever sad
When were together I’m really glad
You are the best gift I’ve ever had.
Even when you’re really mad.
I cherish dearly the day we met
You have enriched my life and now I’m set.

Are they good? Please give suggestions. Thank You.

YA THEY ARE!
I like them

THEY ARE VERY GOOD...
ow competition...lol
MAKE MORE!!!
love is usually what a lot of people are inspired by to write
poems, mine are sometimes driven by hate,...but yours are very good...

Good!!! very good!

I love how you put them all together I love the part
'On the beach I see you glow
Your body makes the ocean flow'

I have written quite a lot of poems and songs, so I know a good one when I see it, and that, my friend, was goood.

That was amazing. I loved the figurative language, I've been trying to write something that good for months!

~~plainwhitets

..Nice I write poetry too...just out of hate and hurt though...I like these a lot..well done

xxForgiveMe

I've read some of the other poems you've posted on this site but I think these are the best.