Poems.

It's a two parter!

This is the first part, it's called Hurry up, comrade.
The guy driving
Knows the guy dying
He's making wide turns
Taking his time
While we're lollygagging clumsy on the floor

You wouldn't take off your belt buckle
I'm all inky...

where it ground in
Oh come on--
He's not even turning his lights on!

But I saw it myself
I saw that red stuff leaking out sticky
In the heat of the sun
Crawling so painstakingly completely and
Memorizing every fingerprint in the asphalt
As it stagnated
A girl wondered what it would taste like
With all those little bits of glass
Like coloured sugar on a cupcake

And the prequel...

Called Oh, but you were right.

My perfect lips are getting cold
While yours are looking like a bruise
You put your hand in my hair
And I couldn't say no to you

Against my better judgment,
I did kiss you
Just like I thought would happen,
You put one grain of sand between my teeth
For each reason why I should have
Just kept laughing

verry good

What do you like or dislike about it?
What feelings does it give you?

great,grateful,gratefulness...,the best way to give.!!
Your poem can drive me crazy!!!
can be a little too much.
can be painful...
so please try it a little bit softer next poem my lips still cold from the ice.
sank You.

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N I ce !!!... some poem I read in ages... keep it up girl...