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What do you think of my poem?

in case you thought I was a noob.....cbgbs shirt biatches Asked by vultureofculture 7 months ago, 4 answers.
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There got your attention

If you dont like what you see
Then simply look away
If you think it isnt me
Maybe ill return someday

I aint jaded or a lost soul
Just because I dont fit your mold
Dont wear your clothes

Now I got to ask:
Do you really love me
Or just the thought of what could be

True im not myself lately
But could it be
This new form called 'me'
Is just me revealing
My hidden feelings?

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Answered by babylove138 on Apr 02, 2008, 05:19PM
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I think its awesome. However what do you mean when you say "maybe I"ll return some day?" like...you'll go back to what you were before? Thats the only part I found confusing,but I really enjoyed the rest

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I'm on the left. my best friend kim's on the right! Answered by ohsocrazy on Apr 03, 2008, 07:53PM
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thats amazing. I love it. really!

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in case you thought I was a noob.....cbgbs shirt biatches Answered by vultureofculture on Apr 23, 2008, 05:04PM
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babylove138:
um,yes thats pretty much it

Thunder Robot Answered by funadvice on May 20, 2008, 07:41PM
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vulture,
you are an amazing writer. I enjoy your poetry.
someday, I will pick up a book and there you will be...

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