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Poem poem

Asked by babygrrl 4 months ago, 6 answers.

not sure if its a poem but I made it rhyme
I call it the friendly sky and I

locked in darkness, surrounded by fear
lost in a place where nobody's here
longing for love of a friend
in the dark one can pretend
so sweet of you to guide me through
alone or...

not as long its true
I prove to you I love you too
that is all I need to do
and since I am you and you are me
I repeat again to thee
alone or not I know the key
the secret to be free is to
trust thyself I must agree
- where the sky is all alone
yet magnificent all on its own
I accept thee for being there
I think of it as you care
for we are one to share the light
I close my eyes through out this night
to dream away just for this flight
to see up close my friend in sight

Answered by kenish_beetch on Jul 25, 2009, 10:57PM
29 answers

I like it happy )

Answered by tessa_cakes on Jul 25, 2009, 11:16PM
90 answers

I like it A lot!=]

Answered by forever_more on Jul 26, 2009, 03:40AM
56 answers

it IS a poem and a good one at that, if you like writing poetry you should try this great site, it is called the poetry community at http://www.poem.org the critism and advice people give you there is amazing.

Answered by wickedchic15 on Jul 26, 2009, 10:08AM
129 answers

Wow, really poetic actually:D
REALLY good

Answered by allecat on Jul 26, 2009, 03:16PM
78 answers

thanks you guys now I find myself writing when I have free time like doing laundry

monkeys jump from tree to tree
just like the boy who's on T.V.
he is friends with a bear
who respects him pretty fair
as the proof is he's still there
but then again that's mighty rare
so think again before you act
because my friend I know a fact
in reality they will attack
unless of course you're in a pack