Poem I wrote, what are your opinions?

Just wondering if anyone could tell
Me what they think I wrote this one nite while being depressed
The comfort of your arms when day is done.
There may be those who'll tell me time will pass
And I'll forget the magic of your touch,
But I belong to a peculiar class
And absence makes me love you twice as much.
So rest assured the spell will always last
Unhampered by the knowledge that you're gone.
You're still the symbol of a lovely past
Someday, perhaps, you’ll learn as well as I
That love is not an easy thing to die.your not
Even gone and I miss you. You seem so far away

I feel like I am being sucked into the black hole
Of death the death of the inner me screaming for
Someone to take my hand and pull me out I feel alone
And lost and though as strange as this may sound not
Fulling conscious and aware of whats going on the pain
Is slowly eating me alive the tears drowning me the salt
From them burns my badly broken heart holding on not
Knowing how much longer the sadness weighing me down
Reaching for someone thats not even there
I feel my mental grasp slipping away slowing
Will you take my hand and pull me out?

Sh!t, thats some bloody good writin you got there