What do you think of my lost child poem?

Her eyes speak

There is a child her eyes speak, where she can not;
Of intense pain, please they say “forget me not.”
I am without a voice; it is you who must care;
Will you see my heart and stop my despair?

I know this sweet angel; she is the daughter of mine;
I'll yell, I'll scream for you, through the end of time.

Time keeps traveling, and stands still for none;
I am still here my child, screaming for you, I have not gone.
One day my dear sweet child, the truth will be known;
I will do my best, so that you will never have to be alone.

I see your hopelessness, I feel your loss; I wear your pain;
No honey, I have not gone, I will always remain.

For it is you my sweet child that beats in my heart;
You are the air I breathe, you're my every thought.
Do not give up, this is not the end; it is only the start.

As I believe that our love can not ever be taken away;
The harder they try to, the stronger it will stay.

One day my child the world will be yours; and it’s beauty as well;
For the gift that I will give you; will be to always let your heart tell.
I will give you all that I can; the world yours will be;
Stand strong my dear sweet child, wait and you will see.

I will never abandon you, I will never leave.


~angelfury~

“hell hath no fury than that of an angel”

thats REALLY DEEP great job you are an awesome poet keep up the good work

So far all your poems are awesome. Should get them together and send them to a publishing company to inquire if they are good enough to make a book of Poems.

I applaud you.

OMG THAT'S AMAZING I LOVE IT!!!
YOU SHOULD SOOO KEEP WRITING!