Poem advice

I was wondering what you guys think of this poem, I write a lot but I end up trashing most of it because I'm never satisfied. Some feedback would be perfect, be honest please

*Not-So-Beautiful Liar*
The days fly by, turn into years
and still,...

you lie into my ears
Deny it again and again
Its the way it all began

I was so innocent and pure
now my heart needs a cure
So much hurt, so much pain
the pieces will never fit the same

Say you love me, tell me you care
brush your fingertips, through my hair
Kiss my lips, hold me tight
say everything, that sounds just right

In an instant it all goes down
you decide to mess around
Why me? Why me? I cry
your just that kind of guy

My smile turned into a frown
my whole world, upside down
Never again will I play this game
never again will I feel the same

wow..I love that poem...be VERY proud. hmm but the ears part is kind of weird :P no offense

hell yah thats a nice poem I loved it

I think its great for everyone that has been in a bad relationship who has ben in love I love it...good job

Good word choice. The rhythm is slightly off.

very pretty, I like it a lot

wow I love it. I can feel the emotions in it.
there is no reason to trash it. you are very
talented.

I love it is really good. I have a poem it's called My Sorry well my bro made it up

You really have a way with your words!!

dis poem is sooo awsem!!!
your a great poet!!!

wow thats really good
two thumbs up from me

woww really nice!!!awesome!!I just luv this poem..I read your another poem too..u are a great poet and I mean this!!!be happy and feel proud of urself because you r great!

wow...really deep. you shoud post that at poems-and-quotes.com

Thats Good.

Pretty good!

I love it! DON'T TRASH IT!!! I have the smae feelings for my poetry and my friends worship my poetry but I always feel like there is nothing in my poems that really say anything. YOUR POETRY on the other hand tells me something and it kind of whispers to me and really is wonderful. Okay, that might sound stupid but it does! Keep Writing!!!

the first comment on this page says the ears part is weird, but I like it. to tell to truth I like the other better, but they both seem to go right through me and say something that is hard to grasp!!! love that kinda stuff!!! write more and put them on this site!!! that would e awesome!!! love it! xox

omg I love it
it seems like me
hhahah
it's reallygood

hey,
that was amazing have you read some of the poems that I wrote? I think that you may like them a lot. btw don't trash that poem that was amazing and you should totally keep going at it. GOOD LUCK

ohhh wow.u hve talent this poem is amazing.u no how pple say you r your worse judge?..well I think dats why your never satisified because you hve talent dis is beautiful...summsz up wht I feel in couple of stanszas keep doin wht you do babe itsz beautiful