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Poem!

Asked by kamari91 4 months ago, 4 answers.

hey pplz I wrote this poem 4 my boyfriend if you could tell me what you think about that would b great! thnx!

Tangled in the web of love
My Heart no longer belongs to me,
It has been tangled up in the web of love, never to return.
My heart has...

been stolen,
like a victim snatched away by its prey.
Yet, I feel no emptiness because in the exchange of my heart,
I have received the heart of another.
Not just any heart but a heart that solely beats for me,
in a way that is so indescribable and so unspeakable it is beyond words.
Continuously, the essence of the beat of the heart echoes passionately but silently
through out my body while simultaneously
sending shivers to every square inch of my temple.
Slowly I have become a slave to the essence
that now slays me with its indescribable ways, because
I am tangled in the web of love.

Answered by mandyyy on Jul 30, 2009, 05:29PM
74 answers

It's beautiful. Good job !!!

xo Miranda(:

Answered by constances07 on Jul 30, 2009, 05:32PM
46 answers

You are very creative...I LOVE IT...

Answered by lnwo1 on Jul 30, 2009, 05:41PM
81 answers

AAAWWW its sooo nice. Good job im sure he will love it

Answered by sxephilfan on Jul 30, 2009, 06:22PM
20 answers

I do think your boyfriend would like it as much as a girl would like it if my girlfriend sent it to me I would not care for it if I gave it to my girlfriend then she would love it