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Poem?

me Asked by badaboom 8 months ago, 2 answers.

Okay just wondering what you think of this poem... happy

The feelings flourished on paper
They flew out of the pen
The hope spread like paint on a canvas
The love grew like a tree
The passion enveloped the universe
The emotions
Traveled from...

heart to heart
Like a river with no end
Creating the pulse of a new beginning

Answered by joshua367 on Mar 23, 2009, 08:50PM
3 answers

I like it and that's saying slot from me I usually don't like poetry and that was good

headshot taken before I realized I had no place to use it. Answered by jillybean on Mar 23, 2009, 09:13PM
31 answers

I love the last line. I don't think the love grew like a tree is necessary. It's a nice image but it's cliche and doesn't quite flow. The poem as a whole is lovely, though!
hugs,
Jill

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