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Poem?

Asked by blackndblue7 3 months ago, 7 answers.

I sit here wondering
Wondering were you are
Of you are near or far
Will you be here tomorrow
Are you safe?

I visit you everyday
Sitting there covered
In wires, I don't
See the real you laying there
I know you went some were
But were?

Everything ends...

with a phonecall
And this one is the worst by far
You were dead and I realized
That you were too many over par.

R.I.p.david l.garland

Answered by awaytobgood98 on Aug 13, 2009, 10:49PM
69 answers

I LIKE THIS ONE.HEY CAN YU READ MINES AND TELL ME WHAT YU THINK PLEASE =]

Answered by blackndblue7 on Aug 13, 2009, 10:53PM
254 answers

ok well I'll try

Answered by blackndblue7 on Aug 13, 2009, 10:56PM
254 answers

thx happy and seriously it was kinda hard to remember back like 5 years ago.

Answered by minalae on Aug 14, 2009, 02:50AM
273 answers

I love the imagery in this peom, especially in the 2nd verse! and there's something I really like about the 3rd verse, but I can't put my fingure on it...
kepp up the good work!
jasmine

Answered by blackndblue7 on Aug 14, 2009, 01:22PM
254 answers

thx minalae happy

Answered by sethpatto on Aug 16, 2009, 04:18PM
218 answers

Everything ends with a phonecall
And this one is the worst by far
You were dead and I realized
That you were too many over par.

Love this part!! great job mate!

Answered by blackndblue7 on Aug 16, 2009, 05:46PM
254 answers

thx happy

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