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One of my sad poems..what do you think

me Asked by loveskate 3 months ago, 4 answers.

Bleeding Misery

days pass..as I melt in this closure of darkness..
a light,alas(t)..to see through me as it proves I am nothing..
but what I am I..whom survived long enough on this earth..
but who am I..to have suffered in unison to those souls...

perished..

words pleading..to linger out of my dried throat..
though I am speechless..for nothing can escape my voice..
my eyes weak..tired of enduring the sleepless nights..
my wrists in the killing..ready to undergo the cut of yet, another blade..

the scars..forever staining my unheard cries..
the neverending pain..haunting me throughout each and every step of life..
the curse..slowly beginning to strike again..
awaiting the worst..only to rip apart my skin..

(I used to have the horrible addiction of what is known as self-harm.I used to cut.and this was a poem I wrote a wile ago when I cut.

leakin it_ Answered by bosslady_jg on Aug 19, 2009, 09:40AM
29 answers

you put a lot of emotion into this poem I can tell,
buhh its really good as well
you should go pro or suhmtingg hehe(:

the sky and sun amazing things Answered by cambei on Aug 19, 2009, 11:19AM
356 answers

this is amazing! raw and emotion and I have to say, since I'm kind of a writer too, I don't like reading much because I'm such a picky reader. But this is by far AMAZING.
Always always right about what you feel because then it is better and truer and pure happy

a little poem she wrote
just a few words
what do you think?
she asked
should I cast my vote?
take that chance and
it was worth it
poem so good
I feel wordless.

me, i was bored i look weird hahah i suck at makeup Answered by deepbeauty16 on Aug 19, 2009, 12:01PM
190 answers

woow! that was really nice and good.. aww! I hope you stopped it thou..
heart touching.. you rock loveskate you got talent!! happy

Answered by fau on Aug 19, 2009, 04:28PM

That was cosmic.

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