One of my freestyle

((this my 2nd I know it suck lol just feel like saying it feel free to post anything you want)))
To many punk as people in my life they dont know how to fight but bit I went to war came out with only couple of scars that shi! As nothing ill go get some...

more. Ya dont know who ya messing with am the top cheif in the army bit. I raise pass all the rank by beating ya friend as. Am a dam monster. Am like the hulk there two side to me like every story. I dont even know my ownself when I lose control. So bit you need to back off. Before you get bury in a grave wishing you left me alone. Cause am never a punk. I run this shi! If you dont know let me say it again am the dam cheif of this shi!

I only listen to rap and honestly this is really bad, it mostly doesn't even rhyme you aren't saying anything just a bunch of random stuff about how you are a cheif also if you are going to show someone rap lyrics you wrote at least write them in a proper format so people can get an idea for how you would rap it.

example for how to write lyrics,
Hey whats up hedgecortha your rap really sucks/
if you want to make it as a rapper you'll need some luck