What do you think of my poem?

Truth
By: Tela

You can run away
from all you fears
but they will always catch up
and you can try and hide
who you are, but I will find the real you

so don’t go and tell me lies
cause I have tender heart
I don’t want my heart to be broken
like it has many times before
I don’t want no lies to be told,
that way no tears will fall
so tell me the truth,
just..the truth

you say you love me,
so that’s what I believe
you say you’ll never hurt me
that I’m all you need

so don’t go and tell me lies
cause I have tender heart
I don’t want my heart to be broken
like it has many times before
I don’t want no lies to be told,
that way no tears will fall
so tell me the truth,
just..the truth

I want us to stay together
for many years to come
I want nothing to come between us
and we can live on love

so don’t go and tell me lies
cause I have tender heart
I don’t want my heart to be broken
like it has many times before
I don’t want no lies to be told,
that way no tears will fall
so tell me the truth,
just..the truth

honey I only want the truth

Keep writing. your writing style is a little weak, and it looks like lyrics to me, kinda like you had a melody in mind, which makes it very inflexible. Its good, keep writing.

I write a lot, so I know a thing or 2 about poems, lyrics and the like. I write songs for band. Well, at least the vocals and lyrics.

omg thats really good I thinhk that you should keep writeing