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What do you think of my worship song?

Asked by haileybre over 2 years ago, 8 answers.

okay.. tell me how it is...
and be serious!!!
I'm in the youth worship band at my church... I wrote this... tell me how it is.

I follow your ways. by:hailey cowan

You, give us all we need
While we choose to please ourselves
And, You forgive all our...

mistakes
Still we choose to blame
Our problems on you
On you.

chorus:
You have put us here for a reason
And we will, do as You say
Your word has, captured my heart
And I, Oh Oh I I'll follow Your way
Yeah, I'll follow Your way

You hear our prayers and cries
When we're hurting deep inside
Oh, Oh
You mend our broken hearts
And yet we tend to drift away from You
Oh we do.

Chorus:
You have put us here for a reason
And we will do as You say
Your word has, captured my heart
And I, Oh, Oh I, I'll follow your way
Yes I, Oh I, I'll follow your ways
2x

Bridge:
I'll follow Your ways
I'll follow Your ways
Oh I, I'll follow Your ways...

true opinions please

Answered by haileybre on Oct 10, 2007, 08:17PM
452 answers

come on guys help me out here

Answered by amblessed on Oct 10, 2007, 08:37PM
12243 answers

Seriously...It's great !! - you should be very proud - Praise filled !! - Shining the light on the most worthy, the Great I Am !!

Answered by m007cat on Oct 10, 2007, 09:32PM
24 answers

It sounds really good to me. The only thing I could think of that maybe you could change is during the chorus where you have And I, Oh Oh I I'll follow Your way change to And I, Oh Oh I'll follow your way because you don't need the extra I in there since I'll is I will. Also during the second chorus where you have Yes, I Oh I, I 'll follow your ways change to Yes, I Oh I'll follow your ways because again you don't need so many I's in the verse.

Answered by funadvice on Oct 10, 2007, 10:48PM
53985 answers

...I guess when your subject is Jesus you can't really come up with something original.

1. Eliminate the commas - they're unnecessary.

2. And yet we tend to drift away from You is an exceptionally awkward line. It's out of place. Change it.

3. Meh. The whole thing just doesn't fly.

Answered by funadvice on Oct 10, 2007, 11:17PM
53985 answers

Not bad at all does it go with a tune or does it have it's own?

Answered by mark21 on Oct 11, 2007, 03:33AM
99 answers

Personally, I think it's very good. Set to music, I'm sure it will flow just fine. (And no one will hear the commas.) :-)

Answered by haileybre on Oct 14, 2007, 02:47PM
452 answers

haha thanks guys!!!
and i'll fix those changes...

it goes to music...

Answered by captdave on Nov 15, 2007, 09:11AM

Very well done! Did you know that Christianity was originally called The Way? In the book of Acts, the term Christian first came to used at Antioch. It would be nice to hear a MP3 of this!

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