[new poem] what are the last few moments of your life like ?

please will you read and comment my new poem I had to write for a class assignment...

What are the last few moments of your life like ?

Do you feel pain run through your entire body like a wife does after she is...

beaten harshly by her husband ?

Or do you feel regretful memories take control of you from all the sins you have committed ?

Do you feel the envious sorrow grab hold of your heart and squeeze just ever so tightly for taking advantage of your time here on Earth ?

Or do you forgive all the people who have betrayed your trust with a smile on there face and just be at peace with them ?

Does your soul fill up with happiness from the knowledge of knowing you have a second chance ?

When you are about to die does the blood in your veins turn cold like the feelings in my dead heart ?

Or does a hot warmth full of love take over your body like someone feels like after their first kiss under the stars ?

---Sarah Ray

I like it I really do
its deep and expresses a lot!

wow that was AMAZING!!! your most likley to get an A++

Wow. Very, breathtaking. You should check out my poetry. I'm new at this, so I;d like some input from thee master