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What do you think of my poem?

PWT's rock!!! Asked by plainwhitets 11 months ago, 3 answers.
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Yes, again!

Keep dancing,
I say
I push and push
got to be perfect
got to be beautiful
My feet ache
under screaming knees
keep going
keep going
My toes turn num
My mind numming too
I keep dancing
keep going
got to be pretty
have to get it right
I dance alone
it will never be right
never be OK.

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Thunder Robot Answered by funadvice on Dec 17, 2007, 06:29PM
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nice

Answered by love16 on Dec 17, 2007, 06:42PM
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nice

Random Flower Answered by britz14 on Dec 17, 2007, 06:53PM
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It's a really nice poem, it's great. Reminds me of continous swirling movement, ever striving to be the best. Excellent job.
Britz

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